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KeLicious
New Member

since 2001-05-24

Posts 9
PA, USA

0 posted 2001-06-02 03:26 PM

Im here with you now,
but are you here with me?
Your focused on her from across the room,
right now she's all you see.

You jealously examine her familiar attitude
towards someone who's new;
And deep down inside
Your wishing again that he was you.

You know her every flirting technique,
you've got used to it after a while;
The way she teases and bats those puppy dog eyes,
you'll never forget her smile.

And so I sit here next to you
listening to you tell me what she's going to do,
because you know that before you were loved by her
and that boy, he was you.

And I myself remember a boy
who once loved me so,
but the love has faded, ur back to admiring her,
and so now I'm letting you go.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-06-02 03:46 PM

Wow tough situation here. You expressed this well and I hope things do get better. Sounds like yer gal pal is a little playa there.
Oh well.......hope to see more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

LCsftball16
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 39

2 posted 2001-06-02 03:56 PM

is this katie?? lol i dunno? i liked the poem! but i got a lil confused...dunno if it wuz just me or if it WAS actually confusing? great job!

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-06-02 06:27 PM

well expressed on the situation you was writing on...hope things turn out better

...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-06-02 06:44 PM

This was such a dificult situation and such a hard thing to deal with...also very sad

....You expressed your feelings well tho...good job

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

5 posted 2001-06-02 07:08 PM

"And so I sit here next to you
listening to you tell me what she's going to do,
because you know that before you were loved by her
and that boy, he was you."

THIS PART! I don't know why i love it so much...It's so perfect!

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes!

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

6 posted 2001-06-02 10:00 PM

OOO I really like this one. Good read. Keep writing.

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