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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
ok ppl this is kinda like an oldy but a goodie for the ppl that know me that longest you others will just enjoy it or hate it either way is cool have a balst ppl. ben redshaw the great out!! I am, I am, I am a weapon of choice I am, I am, I am here by choice I am, I am, I am a weapon of choice I am, I am, I am here by choice I am a weapon of choice Fighting for my rights In my own individual way Beware the weapons of choice We stick together fight together And are eternally yours We are the weapons of choice Fighting for God in every possible way Fighting with each other we see is never the way Satan throwing curve balls Trying to dislodge us from our pact I for one wont let that happen You are my weapons of choice Friends fighting with me against all apposition Beware evil doers for we are the weapons of choice You are, you are, you are a weapon of choice You are, you are, you are here by choice You are, you are, you are a weapon of choice You are, you are, you are here by choice You are a weapon of choice Fighting with me against all evilness Blood pact we don’t need, soul pact we have You, yes you, and you and you and you Yes ever you are all soul pact people Fighting with each other for the good of all mankind Love my weapons of choice Love the God we serve Love one another, love above all else We are, we are, we are the weapons of choice We are, we are, we are here by choice We are, we are, we are the weapons of choice We are, we are, we are here by choice And I for one wont let these weapons break i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ben....this absolutely ROCKS!!! LOVE this!  ~SEA |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ditto that! This is a wonderful piece, I love how you use the repitition, and the ending just hits ya like a ton of bricks. Great work, thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was ok.....Not my favorite by you but that's just an opinion....and opinions will differ from mine Hope to see more from u.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
I thought this was a great poem, and I think it is even greater that you aren't affraid to say your a Chritian!! Love the poem, keep it up Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Yeah that song is pretty cool...... This Is Not Here |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
*looks at Ewok's reply* Song? it's a song? *hmm* n~e~wayz, I LOVE this one Bennerz! it's really well-written. I'm glad ya posted it..I like how it changes from "i am" to 'you are" to "we are" and stuff! *hugz* gr8 poem hun! ~Anna *waves* |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
RIGHT on I'm one of those weapons by your side, I fight with the two edged sword, that piereces the hearts of men, yet unifies those who are with in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
 I really really really like this poem hun!! it rocks!! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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