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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-06-01 07:41 PM


Why am I attracted to them,
as I am now?
What do I see in them,
that's so great?
They don't seem to care,
about anything.
They're nothing,
but trouble.
I guess that's why,
I love them so.
They're into me,
why?
What do they see,
when they see me?
Do they see the bad girl,
inside me?
I'll never know these answers,
at least for now!

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
Meggie1986
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since 2001-05-22
Posts 41
California
1 posted 2001-06-02 12:12 PM


Nice, new refreshing poem.  I like a lot.  Great job.  

*One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it.

anonymous albert ?
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since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-02 12:18 PM


intertesing topic...i liked what you are trying to say...but you should stay away from those who you think isnt good...cuz if you think they arent...they probaby arent...good luck on your choices ...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2001-06-02 03:15 PM


I enjoyed this but if yer hanging out with the wrong people, then you'll inevitably be doing the wrong thing. Watch out, mmmkay?

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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