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knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-06-01 06:50 PM


she weeps so quietly
as she sits in her room
all alone she is, the lady ghost

fair Anyia, i call her name
she looks at me with sorrow in her eyes
begging me with all her heart

her lips dont move
yet her words reach my ears
"Please..Please..tell my husband i forgive him."

with anquish i search
this Castle Darkhate
a haunted place, never resting

i cower in the secret that leads to him
before a magic door that i must open
on the other side lies the truth

the door creeps open and i enter
the locked away chambers
of the shadow dragon, Darkhate

i look into his eyes
as hes locked away safe
trapped in a glyph from his fair lady

the pain and the anquish
as he blames himself
for the death of Lady Anyia

she had gone for help to save her love
as the villagers beat him
she met her death, and now forever she silently weeps

when the news reached the ears of her lover
he broke free and became the shadow Darkhate
killing them all for his revenge

now years later still inprisoned
in this glyph with no way out
hes locked in time as she waits above

i whisper her words into his ear
hoping for the chance to ease his soul
but not even a flicker changes in his eyes

the dragon Darkhate is frozen in time
remembering only the times he spent
being in love with his Lady Anyia

still above i hear her weep
as she waits for all eternity
just to be with her love, Darkhate



“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

Where are you when i need you....?

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 06-01-2001).]

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MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25
Posts 166
West Virginia
1 posted 2001-06-01 06:58 PM


Groovay!  I like this one. not my fav but good nundaless. Love ya.   Keep postin'  

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chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15
Posts 737
Canada
2 posted 2001-06-01 07:10 PM


This is...great! Really great! Wonderfully great! AHHHHHH!!! I'm putting it in my library.

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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
3 posted 2001-06-01 08:44 PM


I LOVED this sooooooooo much! it's going in my library 2!i really liked the story behide this. it was just great. nice job.

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...
4 posted 2001-06-01 08:44 PM


I LOVED this sooooooooo much! it's going in my library 2!i really liked the story behide this. it was just great. nice job. sorry for the reprint!


fall hard, practice harder not to fall

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (edited 06-01-2001).]

anonymous albert ?
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5 posted 2001-06-02 12:23 PM


great job...i enjoyed this lots...very loooong poem too ..heheh ...bye tiff

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope
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6 posted 2001-06-02 03:14 PM


Well done here. I enjoyed this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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