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LCsftball16
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 39

0 posted 2001-06-01 06:32 PM

hey guyz! this isn't one of my stronger poems... in fact i don't like it at all, but this is how i vent so...and not only do i not like it, but itz long!!

It felt good when you were gone
I know it's wrong.
You thought you were my soul mate
But even when your here, you're not
You're with him.

Today you cried and a part of me said
"She deserves it"
When we talk, it's nothing of depth
You're with him.

You told me that I would always come first
But I don't
All these empty promises because
You're with him.

Everywhere we go
You take the spotlight
Guys would die to take his place
Yet you're with him

Could I for ONCE (in my life)
Be like you, surrounded by boys?
And for once you'd feel what it's like?
Even though you're with him.

Could I please have
Someone who would like me
Without falling in love with you?
But you're with him (gives me SOME hope)

It's not your fault
That I can't understand
Why our friendship still means nothing
And you're still with him.

n e where
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 32
Australia

1 posted 2001-06-01 06:35 PM

oo i love this poem...its something i can relate to too, i hope things get better for u n' this person!

~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-06-02 02:54 AM

Very strong emotions in this. You should go over to teen chat because there is a venting thread in there where you can spill everything! It does wonders, seriously.

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

Sunshine

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