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chasing rain
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0 posted 2001-06-01 03:30 PM


I remember you
Standing by the kissing tree
Standing there and waiting
Waiting just for me.
You'd take my hand
And we'd climb up high
So high as though we'd
Touch the sky

And you'd never let me fall...


You with your golden hair
Smiling down at me
Grabbing my hand, you beckon me
To climb the kissing tree.

I remember you
Standing by the kissing tree
Standing there and waiting
Waiting just for me.
You'd take my arm
And wrap it around your waist
And I knew in my heart

That you'd never be replaced...


You with your golden hair
Smiling down at me
Grabbing my hand, you beckon me
To climb the kissing tree.

I remember you
Standing by the kissing tree
Standing there and waiting
Waiting just for me.
Now as we sit
Sheltered by the tree
You lean over close
As I feel you
Kiss me.

Then you take my hand
You take my hand so gently
As you grip the branch you lead me up
As we climb the kissing tree.

"If I find in myself desires which nothing in this world can satisfy, the only logical explanation is that i was made for another world."
-C.S.Lewis

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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
1 posted 2001-06-01 03:52 PM


Okay, i need me a kissing tree.  There is ONE person in this entire world that I want to kiss and I probably never am going to.  Anyways, AWESOME poem.  It was really sweet.  

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

fearing-laughter
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2 posted 2001-06-01 04:02 PM


hey this is really sweet. awwww :-) i liked this poem, been feeling kinda hateful myself today so this made me feel better.  keeeeeeeep writin, yay! :-)
-fear-

AsBurYAnGel
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since 2001-04-03
Posts 14
Virginia
3 posted 2001-06-01 11:00 PM


Hey this is a great poem. I really liked it. Good work.
anonymous albert ?
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4 posted 2001-06-02 12:06 PM


you wrote this quite well with them imagery...i liked it lots ben...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

chasing rain
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5 posted 2001-06-02 01:19 AM


is it just me, or have people been calling me something else...
i am not ben.  

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6 posted 2001-06-02 03:11 PM


Well done here. I enjoyed this one. Another wonderful poem Leah!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

DarkSilver
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since 2001-05-21
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Six O'clock High!
7 posted 2001-06-16 11:31 PM


I wonder what Mike would say about this one.
want me to find out?

I Said I'm sorry but no one heard, Cause ACTIONS, Actions, actions speak louder than words! - Hello McFly - Relient K

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8 posted 2001-06-16 11:39 PM


LMAO@Leah...oOPS! ...ma bad Deejay!..since i reply to so many poems...i guess...i got mixed up with names ...as i sometimes reply to poems...i alraedy replyed to ...hehehe ...bye Leah



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chasing rain
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9 posted 2001-06-18 12:00 PM


Silly Alberta...

Geoff, do you want to die anytime soon?  

I heard a funny quote once...*scratches head* It went like this...
So, this guy walks into a bar...OW!!! :)

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