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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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poet unknown we long to hear the words of life we hold so dear poet unknown we seek to find the tales of life you tell in rhyme poet unknown we ask to know the ways of life to help us grow poet unknown I wait to see if the tale you tell will speak to me --------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Sven, what you are doing for some of the poets in here is wonderful. These tributes just keep getting better and better. This sums up Albertia perfectly. Well done on these. He will be very happy.  ~AF~ Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
thank you!...my friend ...for writing a beautiful piece on me...im truly grateful for your words...and this touched my heart ...i loved it more then words can say...as i've been reading from some time now...and i loved every piece ...they showed to me once again...just how beautiful words are as you write it amazingly ...short or long it just protrays soo much...and im hornored for this...as im EVEN considered to be included in the "passions gallery"...im speechless now...with one more word to say...thank you again<~~~well couple of more words  ...hehe bye sven  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-04-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
well done sven!!! I enjoyed this poem. You are so generous to write these for the poets you have written them about. Well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
awwwwwww this was great Sven! i love reading these and i think its awesome that you take the time to do all of them. cant wait for the next! tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
sven..it has been way too long since i last read your tributes.... another heart-warming, feel-good piece...how do you manage to spread such positive vibes always?? |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Hey this was really good, well done Sven I think you did really well to capture Albert and spread positive vibes at the same time...j/k... anyway can't wait for the next tribute Zu |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was truley awesome work!!! Im amazed...wow! Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Very well done!!! You've expressed this well. Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This is really sweet! Especially Albert's comment, awwww.... "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwwww sven!!...this is beautiful..you dont know how much meaning has exactly gone into those words youve written about the wonderful alberta!!..and wow...hes sure appreciated it!!..you write beautifully as always...makes me wonder exactly how big a heart you have ..keep writting it is a real pleasure reading your work..agpfagp!!
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
a good poem for a good person! I got that, Cherish!  I think you did a great poem about Albert, he was always chattering to me on AIM about he couldn't wait until he got one... hehe.... I knew it would reflect him well. Most of these that I have seen have been superb, Sven. Great work, my friend. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
hahaha...smart allan..hehehe..Another Great Poem From a Great Poet!!!!!..but yeah that one could work too  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
great job with this Sven....very nice |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thanks to everyone that's replied. . . these are great to do. . . when I came up with the whole Gallery idea about a year ago, I wasn't sure how it would be received, but your responses and total enjoyment of the poems have made it all worthwhile. . . thank all of you so much!!! albert my friend, it's my honor to include you here. . . you've been such a great supporter of this new series of Gallery poems, that I could think of no better way to say "thanks" than to write a poem for you. . . thank you again my friend, and I hope that you'll be with us for a long time. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This poem rocks!! Albert, you deserve this! Wonderful tribute. I enjoyed this bunches! --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey this is great, I'm sure he appreciates it  Bel |
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