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since 2001-05-17
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Lost in my own world

0 posted 2001-06-01 12:40 PM


I cry all the time
SOmetimes not knowing why
I just feel this pain
I feel this hurt
Not sure how long
Just how long I can take it
I want to end
This feeling inside
The feeling inside
You used to fill
I've lost everything
All I used to fight for
All I was willing
Just to die for.

**One of the most adventurous things left for us is to go to sleep. For no one can lay a hand on our dreams.**

© Copyright 2001 Renee - All Rights Reserved
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)
1 posted 2001-06-01 04:19 PM


hey,
i liked this post.  can't believe that i'm the first to respond to it.  the situation sucks, but i know how you feel.  i think everybody does.  hope you feel better!!!! keeeeeep posting, yay!
-fear-

TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa
2 posted 2001-06-01 04:55 PM


Wow, to me this poem was very powerful, very nicely written, I like it.

Hope things work out for u

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2001-06-02 02:58 PM


Well done here. I felt the raw emotion in this one. Very powerfl indeed. I think it's sad too.....I hope all gets better.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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