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Alyssa
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0 posted 2001-06-01 10:41 AM


Why can't anyone, Just be anyone?
why can't something, just be something?

why is life the way it is?
why is the world the way it is?
Why is my life the way it is?
why is yours the way it is?

why dont friends always act like friends?
why is the world seem like a not so friendly friend?
why does it seem like my life will never end?

why? i only ask why, so could you give me one good reason, as to why i try?


This kinda just popped in my head and  i hope you guys like it, uh oh another inspriation!!
thanks guys!



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1 posted 2001-06-01 04:00 PM


Cool, Alyssa.  Ya know, there's a lot that we have in common.  My name's actually spelled the same way, if you look at my copyright thing at the bottom of a poem, and your friend Ryan.  Your b-day is the 1st of June, My b-day is the 1st of May, loads of things.  We've both lost someone, although i don't know much about your person.  and we both appearently have had our hearts broken by someone? ANyways, it would be nice to get to know you better.  Byes!

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

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2 posted 2001-06-02 02:56 PM


And hey you both live in Ohio....what are the odds?!

Anyway nicely done. I enjoyed this one a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-06-02 06:26 PM


welp, allysa, i have msn IM, but its under my friends name, and you can email me at  alyssa_w80@go.com...
Thanks you two for posting replies!!
±Ålyssa±

lifes tough get a helmet

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4 posted 2001-06-03 05:09 PM


you both like a guy who's name starts with J
Both of you don't go to teen chat in discussion forum  
Well, back to the poem......
These are questions that we all probably ask ourselves
But I suggest you don't worry too much about these
It'll only drive you nuts
Just look for happiness in things that already show meaning
beautiful write, keep sharing

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

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