turning back the hands of time

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corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-05-31 03:35 PM

I wish I could turn back the hands of time
to go back to many places i love and miss
why does this happen?
it goes by so fast
I wish I could slow down time
to get more out of life
to go back in time
not to do it over again
but to be able to remember so many things
for every thing you do
hold it in your heart
and never let it go

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

KeLicious
New Member

since 2001-05-24

Posts 9
PA, USA

1 posted 2001-05-31 04:13 PM

Hey, awesome job on the poem! I can totally understand how u feel, sometimes u just wish u were a kid again, even though i am only 16... but life is rough sometimes, but hang in there, and keep up the great work!! luv, kel

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

2 posted 2001-05-31 04:22 PM

thanks keep leting me no what u think

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

dramaqueen22086
Member

since 2001-05-05

Posts 50
Hadlyme, CT

3 posted 2001-05-31 04:23 PM

i know what you mean, when i lost my freidns last year in a car crash, i wish i could stop time and go back and tell them not to do it. oh how i wish i had said good bye better, oh how i miss them, R.I P. jeff and mickey, luv you two so much. but i thought this was really good, it's reminds me of them. keep up the great written.

~!kellie!~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-02 02:40 AM

Nicely done here corey. I enjoyed this poem. I often too wish I could turn back the hands of time on certain occasions.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-06-03 02:07 AM

i wish i could slow down time too but unfortunately you cant and never will be...good poem

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

6 posted 2001-06-08 11:57 AM

I like this poem. Im with Dopes, I wish I could turn back the hands of time sometimes myself.

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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