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i lost my heart today

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Godsend_1
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0 posted 05-31-2001 10:12 AM       View Profile for Godsend_1   Email Godsend_1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Godsend_1


i lost my heart the other day
it was ripped out
and thrown on the ground
stomped on, beaten, and torn in a million pieces

i lost my heart the other day
its buried somewhere far away
i dont need it anymore
why bother love only hurts me

i lost my heart ths other day
my brain squeezed it out
or you did?
all i know is that its gone

i wish i had my heart today
life hurts even more without it
or do i mean without you
i dont know, all i know is i hurt

i dont know where this is going
or where it came from
all i know is i cry everynight
for the lost love of my heart

i lost my heart today
when will it return?
will it even come back?
or am i loveless, heartless for eternity

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
no onw knows the meaning of alone

© Copyright 2001 Ben Redshaw - All Rights Reserved
stace_co2003
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In a dream world


1 posted 05-31-2001 10:35 AM       View Profile for stace_co2003   Email stace_co2003   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit stace_co2003's Home Page   View IP for stace_co2003

aww, give it time, really.  
*hugs*

hope things get better for you soon.
oh, and the poem was great! I hope to read more from you soon.

Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

~*brittt*~
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East Haddam, CT


2 posted 05-31-2001 12:15 PM       View Profile for ~*brittt*~   Email ~*brittt*~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~*brittt*~

I know how you feel.. sometimes you get hurt so bad you just want to give up on love, but what is life without it? I totally understand and can relate to this...
~britt~
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3 posted 05-31-2001 12:46 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

It'll come back ben.....all in due time.
Well done on this one.
Things ok?

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

sexychick
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4 posted 05-31-2001 03:26 PM       View Profile for sexychick   Email sexychick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sexychick

hey thats a great poem i like it a lot keep up the good work and i hope to read more bye.
anonymous albert ?
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5 posted 05-31-2001 04:58 PM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

well done...your poems these days are very sad and etc....i hope things are going alright ...bye

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AngelPoet87
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Indy


6 posted 05-31-2001 07:59 PM       View Profile for AngelPoet87   Email AngelPoet87   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelPoet87

Gee, I wonder who this was written about *looks around knowingly* Keep that chin up, hun. You'll be okay. Hang in there and with time the answers will come. You know I'm here. I like the poem, btw, lol. Take care of yourself, kay? Love you. ~ali
Allan Riverwood
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7 posted 06-01-2001 12:18 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

I agree with Ali... keep your chin up, we're all here for you, man.  
Oh and I agree with Javier... things.  Really, things.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

Godsend_1
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8 posted 06-01-2001 12:28 PM       View Profile for Godsend_1   Email Godsend_1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Godsend_1

ppl look at the time of the post and then  silly yous :P
btw thank you mucho mucho for all the praise on my work  i will check yall later
ben

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be.
heh i always thought i was right here

AsBurYAnGel
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9 posted 06-01-2001 11:09 PM       View Profile for AsBurYAnGel   Email AsBurYAnGel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AsBurYAnGel

This poem was great. I know how you feel but things will get better.I hope to read more from you soon.
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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs


10 posted 06-03-2001 02:13 AM       View Profile for xShUgArHiGhx   Email xShUgArHiGhx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit xShUgArHiGhx's Home Page   View IP for xShUgArHiGhx

::hugs:: this was so sad!!! great poem  
never_a_princess
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11 posted 06-10-2001 03:56 PM       View Profile for never_a_princess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for never_a_princess

Mr. Bennerz~
*nods* i know this is from a whiles ago..b4 the "i like me" period..but *awwz* imma cry..very emotional and thought-provoking..as almost all your poems are..i love your writes..and you have the "elegance of a poet" (*steals your words*) i like how you related the losing of your heart to being because of a person and how you asked questions inside the poem..*hugz* gr8 poem..imma go read your other poems now..
~Miss Anna *waves*
sleepymoongirl
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12 posted 11-16-2001 05:34 PM       View Profile for sleepymoongirl   Email sleepymoongirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sleepymoongirl

i hope you get this reply i feel the same way too....

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

takemeawaytoday
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13 posted 02-18-2002 05:12 PM       View Profile for takemeawaytoday   Email takemeawaytoday   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for takemeawaytoday

I love the poem I can relate to it in a way because of how the feeling are...
 
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