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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-05-31 02:06 AM


listen to her voice
so gentle and soft
lapping at you like the sea
wave upon wave brushing your toes

listen as she speaks
hear what she tells you
nothing could be more important
her words are greater then gold

listen to her story
pay attention to every word
read between the lines she spins
details are something you shouldnt forget

listen to her song
as she raises her voice
a perfect harmony that she sings
blessed are those that hear it

listen to her heart
never anything so pure
the purity of the innocent
from an enchantress

listen to her voice
as she speaks to you
telling you her story
singing you her song
all from her heart
the voice of an angel

okays i just added on to it...the fourth and fifth stanza...i felt that SEA was right. so i tried again. hope you like!



“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

Just leave me alone and give me some space.


[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-31-2001).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-05-31 02:08 AM


Tiffy girl.....this is beautiful....but I feel like there is more.......or there should be    SEA
cherish
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2 posted 2001-05-31 02:08 AM


oooh..this is so nice!!.. ...i loved the fow it had and you know i could hear a 'heavenly' voive read it out to me... ...agpfagp!!!!..well done tiff i like very much!




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it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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3 posted 2001-05-31 02:14 AM


beautiful words...graet job tiff...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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4 posted 2001-05-31 02:49 AM


Well done here. I enjoyed this one tiff!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

stace_co2003
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5 posted 2001-05-31 10:08 AM


awwww, Tiffy!!!
it's cute! I love it! I'm going to add it! to the library thingy!!  

Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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6 posted 2001-06-03 11:49 PM


beautiful  

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