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4 cherish ( stupid poem )

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cherish
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swimming in fairy floss.......


0 posted 05-31-2001 12:05 AM       View Profile for cherish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for cherish


..ok this is a stupid poem..haha..meaning it is not meant to be critiqued...just read and think about how stupid cherish is..heheheh..

I scribble your name upon the desk
Over and over
I write it and re-write it
My mind flies away with the
Electric fan overhead.
Im concentrating-
But not on the droning tart out front.
No. My focus is on your name
I want to get it just right.
Just perfect
Perfect in the very way that you are.

Content in engraving you into the wood the hour flies by
People around me gather their books and pens to leave
Great times up, I look back at your name
Formed perfectly upon the brown of the table
It looks wonderful-but lonely
In a mad rush before the next class
i add in large erratic lettering

4 ChErisH.


LMAO @ my stupid poem..hahaha...if i made you laugh them im happy..if i made you shake your head in shame.......in afs words..BOOYA!
© Copyright 2001 cherish - All Rights Reserved
stace_co2003
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In a dream world


1 posted 05-31-2001 12:13 AM       View Profile for stace_co2003   Email stace_co2003   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit stace_co2003's Home Page   View IP for stace_co2003

neato cherish--it's cute!!

but, you're gonna be thrown into a pool in a little bit!!

STace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

cherish
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swimming in fairy floss.......


2 posted 05-31-2001 12:38 AM       View Profile for cherish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherish

i get thrown in the pool?....omg!!...again!!...great...lets just see about that!...
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3 posted 05-31-2001 02:09 AM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

hehe lol...this was cute...just like you ...*thinks*...well not really ...hehe...and i relate to it too...can you believe that ...maybe cuz i do this all the time! ...it was very creative of you writing about this...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

cherish
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swimming in fairy floss.......


4 posted 05-31-2001 02:11 AM       View Profile for cherish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherish

hahahah...me not cute?...awwwwwwww...nah yer right!!... ..i bet you could relate to this..
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5 posted 05-31-2001 02:52 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Is the poem about me?  
cherish
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swimming in fairy floss.......


6 posted 05-31-2001 02:57 AM       View Profile for cherish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherish

is it about you? ...yeah baby...its about you... ...*smacks dopes up the side of his head*..
n e where
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7 posted 05-31-2001 04:23 AM       View Profile for n e where   Email n e where   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for n e where

hey cherish
thanks for tha big WELCOME  
i luff this poem i think its something that i would be doing if i was it that situation

*much props*

~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel.

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8 posted 05-31-2001 10:11 AM       View Profile for Hallucination   Email Hallucination   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Hallucination

Hey Cherish.

Mmmm...
U wanna know somethin' funny.
I got a large Check with a lot of
numbers on it, I had to pay. For what ur writtin' bout.
At list the table thin'.

But... It's cool ( stupid poem )...well..

Your trully
Hallucination "Brian"....
cherish
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swimming in fairy floss.......


9 posted 05-31-2001 09:11 PM       View Profile for cherish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherish

hahha..thanks guys....brain..you poor dude..the only thing we had to do was clean it up with strong smelly stuff which made your eyes water during lunch time haha...
ne where...its no biggie.. ...keep posting guys i enjoy your stuff heaps!
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with you


10 posted 06-02-2001 04:38 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I thought this was great.....
Postman Pat
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The Great Land DownUnder


11 posted 08-06-2001 12:36 AM       View Profile for Postman Pat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Postman Pat

This made me laugh Cheri-bebe! Should that be "stupid cherish"?
You know that that other name was "Patrick" now wasnt it? LOL...I kid!
It reminded me of highschool for some reason-maybe because i haven't been in any of the Eng. Fac. lecture theaters!But i will one day- just to see whos name you DID write. *winks*
anonymousfemale
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12 posted 09-07-2001 02:58 PM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

hehehehe...you're such a psycho..lol  

It's a good thing though. Very cute piece.  

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

 
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