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Meggie1986
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since 2001-05-22
Posts 41
California

0 posted 2001-05-30 11:14 PM


Cynically grinning
Faster we’re spinning
And louder were singing
Don’t stop now, we’re winning!

He’s turning me faster
Yell’s “The world’s racing past her-
This one dance will master.”
The distance is growing vaster!

Softly we’re slowing
Beyond all hope of knowing
That soon we’ll be going
So painful is growing!

*One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it.

© Copyright 2001 Meaghan - All Rights Reserved
n e where
Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 32
Australia
1 posted 2001-05-30 11:18 PM


very cool poem, i like your rhyming technique %%
keep it up

fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15
Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia
2 posted 2001-05-30 11:31 PM


nice. It's an interesting theme I haven't seen much of lately.  Thanks for the refresher.

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
Robert Fr

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30
Posts 497
In a dream world
3 posted 2001-05-30 11:32 PM


that is neat..that's really cool, and I like it alot
esp the rhymes...heehee

Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2001-05-31 02:26 AM


WELL DONE! Wow, I really liked this one. Impressive. I liked it a lot. MORE MORE!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cherish
Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
5 posted 2001-05-31 02:30 AM


hehehe...my head spinning from that one!..hahha...great read!..thank you very much!...keep posting  




"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

SEA
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with you
6 posted 2001-06-02 03:45 AM


makes me feel caught up in a whirwind!!   ~SEA
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