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Passions Galley: Child of the Stars (the light of your heart)

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Sven
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0 posted 05-30-2001 02:46 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Child of the Stars
daughter of Polaris
shine your light
into our hearts
as you did
on that first
day so long ago
when you were
set into the
heavens

grow in wisdom
and in power
lighting the way
for all who
would cast their eyes
upon your golden light

grant unto us
here on earth
the vision of
your sight
and may we
always be thankful
for the
light of your heart

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 05-31-2001).]

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1 posted 05-30-2001 04:25 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

beautifully done Sven    SEA
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this truly told carly well    ......and i can see that..."light of your heart" that lies in her...you wrote this so beautifully...wonderful work here...sven  ...thanks for sharing it...until next time

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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3 posted 05-30-2001 07:58 PM       View Profile for knightlyshadows   Email knightlyshadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for knightlyshadows

awwwwwww this was amazing. you described CarlAy perfectly Sven. i love reading these.....and cant wait for mores!!! im sure shell love this. love ya carlAy *hugs*
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4 posted 05-30-2001 08:06 PM       View Profile for Deranger   Email Deranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deranger

A fitting tribute.
I don't think my misery would survive long in a world solely populated by Carlys...ah, scary thought  

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

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5 posted 05-30-2001 08:16 PM       View Profile for cherish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherish

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sven you write sooooooooooo beautifully!!...carly is going to adore this one!!...i agree with alberta on this one.. ....i dont know you well carly but im sure this reflects upon your personality very well hunny.. ..
keep writing sven...you're a legend!!!




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it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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6 posted 05-30-2001 08:21 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

Great work Sven I have really enjoyed this series, hope to see more soon  
Zu
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Yet another masterpiece added to your collection Sven!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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thanks to everyone that replied. . . I'm glad that you have all been enjoying this. . . it's be my pleasure to do this. . . and it's been fun to include some of you in this series. . .

Thanks again. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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If anyone can write a poem about Carly, it has to be you Sven.
"and may we
always be thankful
for the
light of your heart"
Indeed may we always be thankful.  

~AF~

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10 posted 06-01-2001 04:08 PM       View Profile for fearing-laughter   Email fearing-laughter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fearing-laughter

aw this is so pretty =)
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I echo everybody...this was well done!!

Jenn

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12 posted 06-04-2001 07:11 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

beautifully done Sven
you have an amazing heart
and talent in writing as well  
keep em coming

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, and the rest of yous :)    

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hey, thank you all again so much. . . it's been really fun doing all of these for you. . . I'm glad that you liked all of them. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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14 posted 06-04-2001 11:56 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

Sven~
This was a beautiful poem and Im glad that I had a chance to read it. Im also happy that you came to share you amazing poetry with us here in teen.  

"If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend."

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yet another winner, Sven

i am amazed at how you always make me smile with your tender tributes..

write on!!
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Aww sven this was so sweet!!  
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Beautiful work, Sven!  This is such an amazing tribute.  A tribute that Carly most deserves.  Awesome poem!

--Marie

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Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection.  Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

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She continues to grow... and while the light flickers, it can still be seen... and it still guides me.
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