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the_rescue
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0 posted 2001-05-30 02:25 PM



When they see me walkin down the street they yell
hey it's the cheesy white boy
they think I'm wierd cause they can't tell
the reason for my joy.

I'm just another chessy white boy loving life
I don't care about problems or this worlds strife
I turn away and when hit, I turn my cheek
cause don't you know this earth belongs to the meek.

They spit they yell and they mock me
they push me in the gutters, I am a disgrace
but they don't understand this world I see
even when it's full of pain I recieve grace

Hey cheesy white boy why don't you shut up
that's all I hear As I stand in the town
they tell me that I need to grow up
and then they try to bring me down

I'm just another cheesy white boy loving life
I don't care about problems or this worlds strife
I turn away and when hit, I turn my cheek
cause don't you know this earth belongs to the meek.

they watch my every move waiting for me to fall
they don't see what I have to go through
they just wait hoping I'll answer their call
there call to live with them and be blue

A world full of darkness and thigns gone wrong
but a cheesy white boy I still remain
its the reason for writing this very song
If the world would only let go of the pain.

I'm just another cheesy white boy loving life
I don't care about problems or this worlds strife
I turn away and when hit, I turn my cheek
cause don't you know this earth belongs to the meek.

Dwell on the negative, pesimistic in nature
you search and search for you own answers
but being optimistic is your only cure
to kill those things insyde you call cancers

What good comes if you deny it's existance
don't you think that in time
it will break through because of persistance
waiting for change is your only crime

cause waiting does nothing but prolong pain
waiting only helps to create discontent
but action means a world of gain
and joy until your heart is content

So I remain the cheesy white boy loving life
doing something about this worlds strife
I turn away and when hit, I turn my cheek
cause don't you know this earth belongs to the meek.

The Rescue



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stace_co2003
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1 posted 2001-05-30 04:02 PM


that's really cute, I like it!! and I don't think you are a cheasy white boy!

Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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2 posted 2001-05-30 04:23 PM


this is one of the best poems.....I've ever read..... huge smiles here.....I really liked this    SEA
Deranger
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3 posted 2001-05-30 06:16 PM


Bravo...
Oh...but i like being pesimistic...

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

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4 posted 2001-05-30 07:40 PM


hehe...i really liked this..."cheesy white boy" ...very nice message to it and also had good examples of life's different perceptions

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?


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the_rescue
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5 posted 2001-05-30 08:15 PM


thanx guys I didn't even think it was all that good lol

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6 posted 2001-05-31 02:04 AM


Very well done here!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
7 posted 2001-05-31 03:01 AM


ahhh..theres a lesson too be learnt from this long piece guys....heed it well!!

aagpfagp!!!...i loved this i really really did..i have to say that you write so well it leaves me in awe of you...so cheesy white boy...i hope youre happy...hehehe..j/k...i liked this alot...now wheres my mp3?




"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

the_rescue
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8 posted 2001-05-31 08:31 AM


ok then wierd poems are hits then eh?
Ina
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9 posted 2001-05-31 09:01 AM


this was very good....but u cant always turn your cheek........but thats just me.....you got to see the black tooo.....

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

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