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XFalloutX
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0 posted 2001-05-29 10:55 PM


What is this feeling?
When I see her
My heart starts to beat faster
She begins to talk to me
Sweat begins to run down my face
She walks away
I feel this emptiness
She passes by me without saying word
My heart drops down into my stomach

I find myself dreaming of her
I can’t stop thinking about her
She runs through my head all day
I can’t get her out

There are no words to describe her beauty
Her smile is like the sun it brightens your day
Staring into her eyes you can become lost
The smell of her hair is the sweetiest smell in the world
What I would give to be with her


"should I smile because we are friends or cry because thats all will ever be?".

*sigh* Im bored....Im all alone...ummmmmm...anyone got msn??? XFall


[This message has been edited by XFalloutX (edited 05-29-2001).]

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anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-29 10:57 PM


i liked this poem...you expressed your feelings well...hope to see more

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

stace_co2003
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In a dream world
2 posted 2001-05-29 11:04 PM


I like I like  

lemme guess....Heather?
awwwwww, that's sooo sweet!! you should seriously consider telling her how you feel man...that will release alot of that tension you have building up...although it does create some good poems...
hmm...*ponders*

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

XFalloutX
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3 posted 2001-05-29 11:08 PM


some of the greatest poems probably came from depression

"should I smile because we are friends or cry because thats all will ever be?".

*sigh* Im bored....Im all alone...ummmmmm...anyone got msn??? XFall

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4 posted 2001-05-30 12:19 PM


I liked this one a lot. Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

chasing rain
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5 posted 2001-05-30 12:28 PM


*shhhhh, i'm not supposed to be on*
anyway...
HEY TYPO BOY!!! lol, j/k.
Nice poem ya got there...can i have it?  
Anyway, yeah...what's couped up in your mind pat?   Besides the obvious...cheer up! smile!  
*gets hit by a soccer ball and passes out*  

"If I find in myself desires which nothing in this world can satisfy, the only logical explanation is that i was made for another world."
-C.S.Lewis

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
6 posted 2001-06-03 12:53 PM


Very nice job  
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with you
7 posted 2001-06-03 11:12 PM


*big sighs* this is so incredibly sweet....I love this  
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