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You rescued me
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You rescued me |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
You rescued me i fell in love with his smile we started to date after a while it was great at first but then things took a turn for the worst he came along and broke my heart we got mad and the fighting began to start he ran away happy and with his pride i sunk down and began to hide then you came along and rescued me you were better than a best friend could be you cheered me up when i was down i now was smiling, no more frowns thanks for never leaving me side you made me happy, you always tried so now we're not only the best of friends we're in love, i know til the end yeah, we may part someday but not soon, as you say i love you with all my heart this i promise, we'll never part *~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~* |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
yeah I love the poem and i'm so happy I could rescue you lol jk keep writting peace the rescue |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this poem a lot. Well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very heartfelt poem...i liked it...and best luck on your life  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
you deserve to be happy...I hope you two last a very long time... the poem was good too, by the way loved it!! Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this was so cute! im glad you happy and i wish you the best |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
i really liked this poem... and i know exactly where you're coming from. great post. Keep writing |
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