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Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2001-05-29 05:35 PM

i weep from the pain
of dismembered hearts
i watch as you take it
and rip me apart

you say your just kidding
and its only in jest
well the pain i feel real
and so is the blood i bleed

and yet you see my blood
and you laugh or simply ignore
and i weep from the pain
of my dismembered heart

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
if i am nothing else i am ME

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

1 posted 2001-05-29 05:44 PM

wow, I'm sorry, I hope things get better for you. keep your chin up and just keep smiling
*s*
Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

AngelPoet87
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

2 posted 2001-05-29 06:04 PM

you're the best writer ben i just wish you had something happier to write about hun.

Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

3 posted 2001-05-29 08:52 PM

this was good, very heart felt i think, keep writing, -ab

*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-05-29 10:33 PM

this goes right to the heart of it....I liked this

SEA

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-05-29 10:46 PM

sad...you said it well...graet job and hope things are better

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-05-30 12:08 PM

Well done. I really liked this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-06-03 12:54 PM

know how you feel and its awful...::hugs::

never_a_princess
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since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

8 posted 2001-06-12 10:31 PM

i like the theme "i weep from the pain" and how you used it near the beginning and the end. *likes this one* not as good as others, but still really goodish! *hugz*
~Anna *waves*

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

9 posted 2001-06-13 09:05 AM

nice write man I hope it gets better you know

Rescue

ps if you need to talk to anyone I am here but then again I might not be technically here anyways you know what I mean

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

10 posted 2001-06-16 02:46 PM

I like this one, Ben. I'm sorry that you feel this way... *hugs* Email me sometime if you ever need to talk. I enjoyed this poem. I hope you feel better.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection. Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

takemeawaytoday
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since 2001-04-30

Posts 13
Missouri

11 posted 2002-02-18 05:17 PM

great poem hope to hear more from you about it

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