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Godsend_1
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0 posted 2001-05-29 05:23 PM


as i sit and ponder
lifes many odd things
i realize
that i am me
i am not you
or what you want me to be
i am me
nothing more, just me

what an odd thought
to simply just realize
that i am me
not a fake
but a real
a real me
not that one you think i should be
how odd, oh well

does that upset you
me being me
and not being what you want me to be
does it make you angry
that i am me
and not what society thinks i should be
i hope not cause i like being me
oh well, sorry if it does

sitting here i ponder
what it is to be me
and not what others want me to be
i act like me, talk like me
maybe cause i am only me
so i say to you who wish i wasnt me
i am what i am and thats all that i am and all that
i ever shall be, so deal with it

and simply scream ' i am me '

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
if i am nothing else i am ME

© Copyright 2001 Ben Redshaw - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-29 05:26 PM


you and tiff...wrote the exact same poem...just differently...was this planned?...haha..yea great job...i liked it

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Godsend_1
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2 posted 2001-05-29 05:37 PM


nope it twasnt i didnt even read her poem till after i wrote mine lol oh well heheheheh silly me but i glad ya liked the poem, ben redshaw the great out!
AngelPoet87
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3 posted 2001-05-29 06:11 PM


personally i love who you are and if any one disagrees they have to deal with me *gives growling face*
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4 posted 2001-05-29 11:29 PM


Well done on this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-06-03 12:58 PM


I loved the meaning behind your poem...you should never be anyone but yourself   Good job i liked it!
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6 posted 2001-06-05 12:38 PM


Wow I loved this! The message was so clear!  I dislike fake people a lot.    This is so going into my library  

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

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