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Teen Poetry #4

the good night kiss

corey14
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-05-29 04:19 PM

the champain is ready
along with the glasses
the sun is setting
as i sit here with my love

now the stars are out
she falls asleep next to me
i watch over her
when she woke up
i brought her home
and tucked her in
i gave her a good night kiss
as she fell asleep

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-29 05:22 PM

sweet poem...great job...i enjoyed the read

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

2 posted 2001-05-29 08:45 PM

nice read

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-29 11:39 PM

Sweet read!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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