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dramaqueen22086
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0 posted 2001-05-29 04:13 PM


hey people you think you can help me out, i am having a really bad week, and i don't know why, i worte this today to my b/f, to try to xplain how i feel, i don't know if he got it. i don't know what to do read it and pleasse tell me what you think i should do.... thanks so much
~!kellie!~

It’s not you

Life around me’s spinning
And yet I’ve stopped in time
Days and hours roll on
And still, I’ve lost my mind

You’re sitting here, next to me
And I always know your there
I still feel empty deep inside
Even though you care

There’s something from me missing
And I know it’s deep inside
When I get close to you
My feelings run and hide

I have so much pain in me
And I really don’t know why
My heart is so happy
And yet I always cry

There’s so much going on with me
And I don’t know what to do
My life is so confusing
And it has nothing to do with you

You are always there for me
And always in my heart
Even though we are always together
I cry when we’re apart

I’m sorry for the way I am
I don’t know what’s going on
I love you more then life it self
I’m sorry I’m always wrong



© Copyright 2001 :sunshine: ~!kellie!~ - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-29 04:20 PM


Ohhh unfortunately..I can relate. First thing. Talk to someone. Counselor, mom, dad, friend's mom, some adult. They've all experienced tough times and it helps to hear from someone older that you're not alone. Maybe you should take a break...Spend some time by yourself, not pitying whatever's going on but trying to find out who you are. If none of that works..paint or write. I know for me its a lifesaver...*hands you some candy* This stuff helps too.   Hope things improve. *hugs* to you!
  ~Carly

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   ~Edouard Manet

lonely*soul
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2 posted 2001-05-29 04:22 PM


kel, as i told you b4..talk to chris..hes an understanding guy!!! and im, sure hell get that your not having the best of times..no worries..and member we can have as many trampoline talks as you want  
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3 posted 2001-05-29 04:23 PM


I'm older   you could talk to me....just email me, if you want, it's there   and yea, I've been there too.....definately talk to someone   hugs, SEA
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4 posted 2001-05-29 05:33 PM


very emotional poem...and a great start is letting the oteh person know ...how exactly you feel and soon as he gets this...i hope you guys talk it out

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5 posted 2001-05-29 11:27 PM


Nicely done here. Emotional poem!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

knightlyshadows
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6 posted 2001-05-30 01:58 AM


u just wrote wut ive been going through last few days! u did a wonderful job on this, ive been wantin to write about this too....just couldnt seem to find the words. u did tho and its great! this is going to my library as a reminder....and i agree with the others that you should find someone to talk to. best wishes to you and good luck!
tiff

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Just leave me alone and give me some space.

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7 posted 2001-05-30 06:08 AM


If he's an understanding guy, he'll be able to cope with everything. He'll stand by you. Great write, and good luck to you!!

Jenn

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

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8 posted 2001-06-03 12:37 PM


i relate to this one too...i really liked this poem...it really hit home for me. I hope things get better for you soon...time will heal all hopefully  
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9 posted 2001-06-05 12:42 PM


Beautifully written    This one is going in my library.

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

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