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Teen Poetry #4

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little_krazy_poet
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 41

0 posted 2001-05-29 01:24 AM

this is also about my first love (i just wrote it)
hope you like it

my firends said
that i was better off alone
but it kills me
when your not home

but life goes on
from day to day
but why should it
it go on this way

that one day
when you left
that was the end
that was the rest

i hid
i shut my self away
and my life had stopped
and i stay

that was a long time ago
things are different now
but when i look back
i can’t see how

i gotten used to being single
my firends still laugh but i sigh
but i go home lock myself away
sit alone and cry

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-29 01:53 AM

emotoinal poem...very sad...i liked the poem...but i really hope things are better...keep writing

...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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