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pharon
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0 posted 2001-05-28 11:38 PM



             nerves tingle
                  as              (touch)
              vision blurs
  (sight)        while  
              mouths water  
                   at         (taste)
             sweet perfumes  
(smell)           you
           (sound) the alarm
                   i
               desirelove

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anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-29 12:49 PM


creative...i always enjoy your unique format...great job and keep writing ...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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2 posted 2001-05-29 02:15 AM


Wonderful.....pharon....simply impressive.
I liked this one. All the senses combined to desire the greatest abstract feeling ever known to organic matter!
Wonderful job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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3 posted 2001-05-30 06:33 AM


What an awesome format!!! Incorporating all the senses in gave the poem this totally original feel.

Great work!  

~AF~

Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."
-Van Kaam

vixengrl04
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4 posted 2001-05-30 11:35 AM


Interesting format.  I liked reading this because it was so different.  

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

fozzyozzy
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5 posted 2001-05-30 09:20 PM


Wow. this might be my favorite one yet.  You did an awesome job!  I always enjoy your pieces

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
Robert Fr

stace_co2003
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6 posted 2001-05-30 11:56 PM


umm, ok. it's really good, but I just don't get poems like this. they go right over my head. but I'm odd, so it's ok!

STace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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7 posted 2001-06-02 03:21 AM


I really like poems like this   I don't think I've done any like this...but I like it    ~SEA
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