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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
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Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-05-28 07:56 PM




Ducky

I have a friend who
I haven't talked to
in a while
He always cheers me
up when I'm feeling
blue
If he was a duck he'd
quack, but he isn't
Plays around all the
time
I always end up with
a smile, when he
tapdances his way into
the room
Very honest in every
way
Writing awesome poetry
but posting them in the
weirdest way, I won't
ever understand
Serious when he has to be
comforting in lots of ways
He says his "mu hahaha"
all the time
there is alot more I'd like
to say about this guy
but i will say is
that were very lucky
to have this ducky!!

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

© Copyright 2001 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-28 08:44 PM


interesting poem...i like how you told it...great job ina! ...welcome back!...and keep writing ...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-05-29 01:37 AM


Quack!  
Yer a sweetie Regi *hugs*  

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
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obscured vision
3 posted 2001-05-29 04:19 PM


aww this was sweetish! i think everybody has their own Ducky. great job regina
i loved this:
'I always end up with
a smile, when he
tapdances his way into
the room'
tiff


“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

Just leave me alone and give me some space.

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-29-2001).]

knightlyshadows
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obscured vision
4 posted 2001-05-29 04:20 PM


okays this made me thinks of me bro so i gots to add it to me library!

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

Just leave me alone and give me some space.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
5 posted 2001-05-30 07:42 AM


Hehe...Regina this is great! He shall now be thought of as a ducky.  

~AF~

Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."
-Van Kaam

Acies
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6 posted 2001-06-02 05:06 PM


So, Dopey is Mr. AFLAC eh  
good job Ina

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

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