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Ski*Chick
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0 posted 2001-05-27 10:29 PM


Tonight as we leave in our own vans
We will look at each other
To see what we look like and how we laugh
You'll look at the book and wonder I'll miss her

As we think how our friendship was created we know
We will think will she be online tonight?
Will she call me tonight?
Will she still be my best friend in 20 years?

We will think of so many things
Like talking until 11:00pm every night
Keeping the whole room awake
But as soon as the nurses leave we talk again

Seeing each other in the hall way
During lunch
And when we return from our activity
When we return from home

We will always be friends forever
And when the world turns the back on us
We will always have each other.

I want to thank you for a lot of things
like chatting until 11pm
and sharing your friendship

But I won't say
good bye
I will say see you later Kelly

Your friend,
Minna
May 25, 2001
©

Learning how to walk, Learning how to talk, are the hardest thing to do in a baby life. Learning how to walk for me is the hardest thing to do.

© Copyright 2001 Minna - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-28 12:42 PM


this was a very touching poem...a very nice tribute...i really liked it and thanks for sharing it with us ...keep writing ...?

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2 posted 2001-05-28 01:51 AM


Beautiful tribute.....well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-05-28 12:09 PM


Minna, this is so nice. I used to think of a friend this was until she turned out to be a total skitz. I hope you guys do stay friends for ages.  

~AF~

Know what you want. Become your real self.
~ David Harold Fink ~

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4 posted 2001-06-13 05:45 PM


Minna --- the purity of your heart always seems to overflow in your poems.  I'm truly amazed by you.  keep sharing and thanks for the wonderful read.

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

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5 posted 2001-06-13 05:58 PM


This is a good poem. And I hope that you and your friend will be friends forever!  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

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6 posted 2001-06-17 07:51 PM


This was so sad and so sweet! I hope you gave this to her...beautifully written.!
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