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XFalloutX
Junior Member

since 2001-05-13

Posts 31
NC

0 posted 2001-05-27 10:23 PM

I stand-alone
I forgot how it feels to be loved
I want to remember
But there’s no one there
I am confused and lonely
I want someone there for me
But there’s no one there
I close my eyes
I imagine her touch
But there’s no one there
I grow weaker every day
I need someone there for me
But there’s no one there
I wish it could be better
I wish I wasn’t so alone
But there’s no one there
I long for her kiss
I long for the smell of her sweet hair
But there’s no one there

"should I smile because we are friends or cry because thats all will ever be?".

*sigh* Im bored....Im all alone...ummmmmm...anyone got msn??? XFall

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

1 posted 2001-05-27 10:34 PM

*sniff*
*whacks pat*
EVIL!!!
Besides, I'm here! hehe.

I like the emotion in this piece...keep writing!

-Leah

"If I find in myself desires which nothing in this world can satisfy, the only logical explanation is that i was made for another world."
-C.S.Lewis

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

2 posted 2001-05-27 11:11 PM

I loved your poem
And I have msn too
so I will check your profile
to see if i can get your email.
if not check myne and myne is in there

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-28 12:44 PM

very sad...and you put it so well...great job on writing this...and hope things get better for you

...keep writing

...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-28 02:12 AM

Well done here. I really felt this poem. Such a nice read.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-05-28 12:20 PM

Aww how sad. Don't worry though. If you wish hard enough something will pop up. If it is a bear run.

~AF~

Know what you want. Become your real self.
~ David Harold Fink ~

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

6 posted 2001-05-28 03:44 PM

patrick,

great poem, loved it, mean it.
but keep writing, and ignoring me, in which ever order you prefer :P
*s*
Stace

[This message has been edited by stace_co2003 (edited 05-28-2001).]

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-06-02 01:08 AM

Loneliness is such a horrible feeling...::hugs:: You portrayed your feelings beautifully tho...great job

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