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Poet on Acid
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0 posted 2001-05-27 10:20 PM



I come home to my hell
My very own
I’m not welcome in this house
So I’ll leave without a goodbye
I head for the door with tears in my eyes
“Don’t wait for me”
I was about to say
But their faces gave me that look…
…It said, “Go away”
With utmost fear I turn the lock
Shaking with my every breath
I’ll never be seen again
Even until my very death
No emotions on their faces
As I take one last look
“(edited) you all” I scream a I run off into the cold
I may seem so bold
But damn it
I’m scared
Where will I go?
How will I live?
I wont
The thought crosses my mind
As I remember the tree
The noose I my only friend
it loves my misery
With all my energy
I take one last leap
“I’m not dying tonight, that can wait”
And that
Everyone
Was the end
Of my tragic hell


"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ<

[This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 05-28-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Tony Ryan Johnson - All Rights Reserved
fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
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1 posted 2001-05-27 10:50 PM


tony,
yay for the poem! told ya that u gotta edit it though.  great work..i really liked this whole series. keeeep posting.
-fear-(bergundy) yes fear me lol

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-05-28 02:25 AM


Well done, Watch the language though.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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3 posted 2001-05-28 02:59 AM


I take one last leap
“I’m not dying tonight, that can wait”
And that
Everyone
Was the end
Of my tragic hell

This part is excellent.

Well done.  

~AF~

Know what you want. Become your real self.
~ David Harold Fink ~

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 255

4 posted 2001-05-28 12:04 PM


good job    i liked it im trying to find all of them!  lol  

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

anonymous albert ?
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5 posted 2001-05-28 08:22 PM


beautiful job...i enjoyed this a lot...well written...hope to see more ...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
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6 posted 2001-05-28 09:39 PM


Well, it's maturing very nicely...i must go track down your sprawling genius...

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes!

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
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swimming in fairy floss...........
7 posted 2001-05-28 09:54 PM


greta job on this one....its branching out too...i happy to see
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