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princess^sarah
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0 posted 2001-05-27 12:28 PM


friends are spose to stick my each other
not just abck away and put each other on IGNORE WHEN THEY DO ONE THING WRONG
no -one is perfect
BUT YOU THINK YOOOOUUU ARE
you think your so tough
YOU THINK YOU CAN RULE MY LIFE
but no... no im not falling for your dumb jokes
I AM MY OWN LIFE
don't you try and change me
don't you dare try

When i come to you when i have a bad problem
I THOUGHT YOU'D ACTUALLY UNDERSTAND
what i was trying to talk to you about
I ACTUALLY HADNT SPOKEN TO ANYONE ABOUT
i care for you so so much
BUT YOU JUST TREAT ME LIKE A DOORMAT
don't come crying back to me

coz my shoulder i use to lend you is now gone......

© Copyright 2001 sarah alford - All Rights Reserved
fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
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1 posted 2001-05-27 01:40 AM


~sarah~
hey.  this was a kool poem, i like.  if your really pissed at the person tho try to make ammends.  hate sucks.  well that's the end of my awe-inspiring reply :-) i really hope ya feel better.
-fear-

anonymous albert ?
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2 posted 2001-05-27 01:43 AM


this one was differebt form i saw from you...full of bitterness and anger...you alright?...but hey i have wrote a angry poem too...hehe so you aint alone and i posted it and i felted better about the situation...hope it does for you also and ...lol!...and there is a lot of people that care for you its just some just always express it...i know what you mean and hope things turn out better or if this person is like this...you shouldnt take the time and stress over...ok?...keep writing sarah

ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

anonymousfemale
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Limbo
3 posted 2001-05-27 08:09 AM


Ahh Sarah. Just keep your head up and try to move on, ok.  

~AF~

"I'm not a slave to a God that doesn't exist."
Manson - The Fight Song

vixengrl04
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4 posted 2001-05-27 11:42 AM


It's so important to realize who your true friends are, and not to give your friendship to someone who will not be there to return it.  Hope you work things out with these friends of yours.  

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

hush
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since 2001-05-27
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5 posted 2001-05-27 01:06 PM


girls are very petty. this poem is petty, the arguement was probably petty, and in a month, you'll probably realize this and become friends again.

If I had a soul I sold it
           for pretty words

-Allen Ginsberg

Deranger
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6 posted 2001-05-27 06:31 PM


Heh.  Better watch it with that, "Girls are very petty" thing...hehe, nothing but trouble with that!  

ANyway, i love your harsh words...such violence and humanity...more power to ya.

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes!

stace_co2003
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In a dream world
7 posted 2001-05-27 10:00 PM


wow, such.......emotion!! but I understand where you are coming from!!

but try to make ammends...hate sux.

keep your chin up though!!  
*s*
Stace

fozzyozzy
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8 posted 2001-05-27 10:06 PM


I don't know what to say.  Obviously, you'd be better off without friends like these. Anger is a natural thing anyway.

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
Robert Fr

princess^sarah
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melbourne
9 posted 2001-05-27 10:11 PM


it isnt a girl im fighting with.... ITS A STUCK UP LITTLE SNOB THAT POSTS IN HERE....

A CERTAIN SNOB THAT RECKONS IM A SLU*


anonymous albert ?
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10 posted 2001-05-27 10:13 PM


really?...lets go burn his house down!

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-27-2001).]

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11 posted 2001-05-28 01:24 AM


Albert...shhhh....

Look, please let's not get all rowdy Sarah, ok? RELAX....that's what I will ask from you. If this thread gets out of hand it will vanish. That's just a warning.

Now, for the poem.......I think you are venting yourself, and that's great but do NOT say who the person is and do not attack.
I liked the poem, and I hope to see more from you.  

let's all be nice  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

princess^sarah
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12 posted 2001-05-29 05:41 AM


aww who can't  

wow i hope i didnt give it away too much     

*cuddles n kisses for albert*

*hugs for everyone*

love sarah

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 06-02-2001).]

princess^sarah
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13 posted 2001-05-29 05:44 AM


oops... made a booboo..

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 06-02-2001).]

anonymousfemale
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14 posted 2001-05-30 06:44 AM


Sarah!  


~AF~

Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."
-Van Kaam

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 06-02-2001).]

Acies
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15 posted 2001-06-02 05:26 PM


I know that you are hurt and are just venting Sarah, but let's not create some hostility in here.  Passions is not meant for that.  If other members want more information, please do it outside of passions. Just email them the information, but please do not mention more in here.

I have edited some of your own replies for that reason alone.  Hope you do understand.

If you need to talk, I'll offer to listen, so you can email me.

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
16 posted 2001-06-02 05:33 PM


Your poem has to be the best poem I have ever read on here.Some of my so called friends want me to listen and solve their problems, but if I ever have a problem or I'm upset they don't care.And when the come crying to me they want me to listen but I'm so sick of it.My best friend cries everyday and says it's my fault so now I just laugh.But anyway keep up the awsome work.
  Lauren

princess^sarah
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since 2001-01-12
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melbourne
17 posted 2001-06-23 04:28 AM


awww cmon  

he deserved it

Love's Addiction
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all around you
18 posted 2001-06-24 10:40 PM


sarah,
i've felt this was b4 and it aint good. maybe u should contact this person outside the forums and talk 2 them about y this made u so angry........o god now i sound like a guidance counsler........personally sarah, i think u have a right 2 feel this way, especially if it offended u.

I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park

princess^sarah
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19 posted 2001-06-24 11:15 PM


pretty hard when im on ignore >
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20 posted 2001-06-25 03:37 PM


Umm this was a little different from what I normally read but hey we all like change. Good work.
Andrew

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