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pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2001-05-25 10:24 PM

       Northern Lights
awake  beyond  the  stars
The    WATCHER
     rewardsheaven
  with laughing

clouds

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

1 posted 2001-05-25 10:32 PM

God your stuff is awesome. I read it a couple times which is a good thing. You have an incredible skill to be short and succint but also obscure. Very nice very very nice

fozzeozze

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
Robert Fr

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2001-05-26 12:02 PM

heeeeey,
i liked this, short but sweet. keep writin!
-fear-

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-26 01:03 AM

yes!...once again...your sytle is graet...i liked this...thansk for sharing it...hope to see more...

...?

ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-05-26 12:39 PM

This is very cool and quite unique. Short pieces that give such an effect are worthy of being printed off.

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-26 08:36 PM

VERY well done. I love your poems. So deep and enlightening.....they make me ponder the worlds ways.....well.....they do!
I really really love your poetry....keep posting. I am a fan.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2001-05-27 03:31 AM

very interesting words....made me reflect for a while..

hmmm...there is "rewards heaven", right?

and i hope to witness the majesty of the Northern Lights one day

obscurity of cloud
Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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7 posted 2001-05-27 12:52 PM

This is so well written. You've done an incredible job; i really liked this. Keep posting!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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