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Ski*Chick
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since 2001-01-13
Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa

0 posted 2001-05-25 08:58 PM


If only
I could walk without any walker or braces.

If only
people could give me a chance in life to explain.

If only
I could smile more often and not have my happy bubble
poped always.

If only
my days could be shiny like the sun outside.

If only
people could understand me, before they give up on me.

If only
there was a forever so my dad would be living.

If only
the doctors could find a cure for cancer.

If only
my disability could get out of my body.

If only
I could walk by myself but that's only in dreams.

© of Minna
May 19, 2001

It's hard seeing someone loving your ex, when it's your ex friend who's loving him.

© Copyright 2001 Minna - All Rights Reserved
anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-25 09:39 PM


very emotional and sad...i hope things are better...this touched me...that you have to go through this...i also going through my little thing...but for you someday you will!...and i hope you are able to stay strong through these times of your life ...

ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2001-05-26 06:32 PM


This is sad....But regardless of everything you can achieve your goals and I hope to see you do that  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
3 posted 2001-05-27 07:32 AM


There is always a light at the end of the tunnel. Things may seem bad now but from what I have read, you have enough strength in you to achieve anything.

Good luck to you.  

~AF~

"I'm not a slave to a God that doesn't exist."
Manson - The Fight Song

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 495
East Haddam, CT
4 posted 2001-05-27 12:04 PM


Awwww sadness...I think this really emotional and sad, and I truly wish you the best.  

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

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