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LoneWolf
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0 posted 2001-05-25 08:06 PM


“Hush Child”

Hush child…
Don’t you worry
For your not alone
Even in the shadows
You shall always have
my hand to hold

Hush child…
still you tears
for within this maze
there shall be a light
though you may not see it yet
in the end it will be alright

Hush child…
You have nothing to fear
Nothing we see
Is quite what its seems
And if ever you need me
I shall be there

Hush child…
There is no need to hide
For it only keeps you
From the freedom you desire
So come with me
I shall guide you to the starting place

Hush child…
And don’t you fret
You will make it through this
Just be strong
And in the end you will know
That you could make it all along

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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Low Man's Lyric
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In a dream
1 posted 2001-05-25 08:14 PM


I enjoyed this poem and the last two lines ended it well. Hope to see more from you.

Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."  
~Anonymous

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2 posted 2001-05-25 09:28 PM


i liked the positive tone...to this poem...graet job on writing this...i liked it alot...thanks for sharing and hope to see more... ...?

ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

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3 posted 2001-05-26 06:26 PM


The positive tone to this poem really appeals to me. I enjoyed this poem a lot.
Hope to see more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Deranger
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4 posted 2001-05-26 07:13 PM


"positive vibes" hehe.  

I like this.  Almost a lullaby...

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My skull has glowing green eyes!

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