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corey14
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since 2001-05-23
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Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-05-25 07:57 AM



I sit here and think
I think about stuff
but most of all I think of you
when I think of u I get sad
because i miss you so much
some day we will meet again
I dont know if I can wait that long
will we get together some day
and stay like that till the end of time
till the time we meet
we will have loved and lost many times
   you can find love in many people but most wont last
untill you meet the love of your life
we have met before
and we will meet again
you are my love and i wont let you go
but untill we meet again all I will do is think of you  


                              corey baker

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u  hate me and i will still like you

© Copyright 2001 corey baker - All Rights Reserved
cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
1 posted 2001-05-25 10:28 AM


awwwww..this is very sweet...i enjoyed the read..it seemed very sincere...i wish i had sumone round to think of me like that..haha...thanks you a lot for the read

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 384
IL
2 posted 2001-05-25 01:33 PM


Hey, i really liked this one a lot. i can so relate to what you have said in this poem. good job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

anonymous albert ?
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3 posted 2001-05-25 04:40 PM


sweet poem...gurls gonna love this...haha...yea ...this poem was great...i really liked the emotions...keep writing...love marathon runner's brother... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

keoni
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since 2000-10-16
Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC
4 posted 2001-05-25 05:08 PM


this really hit home for me. I totally understand what you are describing here, cause I am going through it every day. Nice poem. Strong emotions. Good luck with the situation.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada
5 posted 2001-05-25 05:50 PM


This was an exceptionally good poem
but... You should not stay hung up on somebody, you should move on with your life.  Like i say if it's meant to be, it's meant to be

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

Dopey Dope
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6 posted 2001-05-26 05:10 PM


Very sweet poem here.

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