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princess^sarah
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0 posted 2001-05-25 07:31 AM


i look up at the dark sky
theres one bright star in the sky
i wish i could find hapiness
but all i can do is cry.

theres memories of you in my head
theres loneliness in my heart
i wish my life wasnt so hard
and that we werent so far apart.

i miss that fire in your eyes
i miss the way you smile
you took away that empty feeling and made everyday worthwile.

i love you so much that it hurts
with all my heart i do
and more than anything in this world
i hope you still love me too...

this is for my b/f mat..... i just found out he's been cheating on me

i'm so depressed (edited)

i don't give a (edited) if anyone gives me (edited)


[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 05-25-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 sarah alford - All Rights Reserved
anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-25 07:35 AM


this is a very tough situation...youw rote it so well very real poem...hoep thinsg get better and...never stop writing sarah...stay strong!... ..?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

vixengrl04
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2 posted 2001-05-25 10:17 AM


Awwwww hun this is sad.  Sounds like a tough situation, but it won't be the end of your world.  Hope you get through it well, and I wish the best for you.  

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

the_rescue
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Japan
3 posted 2001-05-25 01:16 PM


Hey the poem was good and well written and the situation well it stinks, dont give up.
fearing-laughter
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4 posted 2001-05-25 04:03 PM


hey,
this is a really good poem. i liked it lots.  if your b/f did that to you he obviously doesn't deserve you.  i hope your okay, and don't give up.  NOBODY is worth killing yourself over.  good luck.
-fear-

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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The Hot Girl From Canada
5 posted 2001-05-25 06:58 PM


Hey babes
first off i would like to say the poem was beautifu land it is going in my library  
but i also want to give you a bit of advice.
If your b/f cheated on you i wouldn;t stick around, you may love him but if he did it once and you go back to him he knows he will get away with it a second time and he might do it again.  I know it's tough but hunny you gotsta move on keep smiling and writing.

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

anonymousfemale
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6 posted 2001-05-26 01:21 PM


Hey Sarah, sorry to hear this.
Just remember you know where to find me if you need to talk, alright.  

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

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7 posted 2001-05-26 08:26 PM


Sounds like a tough time. I liked the poem though and hope things get better.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

lonely*soul
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east haddam (moodus) ct :)
8 posted 2001-05-26 08:31 PM


i know its hard to find sumthing like that out, but ya gotsta move on, like they said^^^ hes done it once, and hell think hell get away with it... srry hun! but you wrote a good poem  
cherish
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9 posted 2001-05-26 10:36 PM


aw..this is so sad...i hope you make it through sarah...hang in there darling...we all love you here...

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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