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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-05-25 04:02 AM


Why are guys so drn confusing?
you never tell us how you feel.
you never try to learn from us.
we try and we try but we still just don't understand!

we tell ya to ask for directions do you?
no you have to be stubborn and get lost!
we ask you to do something for us,
in a half an hour it's still not done!

ok so i know we can be confusing to.
but at least we tell you how we feel,
ask for directions,
and do stuff when told.

boys all we ask is this,be men!
tell us how you feel.
do something for us when we ask pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee
and most importantly ask for directions!

Robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

© Copyright 2001 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-25 04:06 AM


Well gee....I hope *I*'m a man....hehe
well done...and yea....some guys are just blah.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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2 posted 2001-05-25 05:25 AM


intersting poem...yea...some guys are just...blah...like dopey there ...but keep writing... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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3 posted 2001-05-25 06:16 AM


Not your best poem, but I can agree on the message!
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4 posted 2001-05-25 01:29 PM


i know it's not my best but had to write it!
Robin

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5 posted 2001-05-25 02:54 PM


HAHA yeah some guys do suck. this is the thing Boys=suck, stoopid, dumb...immature etc
Men= wonderful, mature, fun to be with, "slightly" less confusing  

You just gotta find the right ones.

Keep writing

Jenn

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

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6 posted 2001-05-25 04:27 PM


guess...that makes me a man

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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7 posted 2001-05-26 06:39 AM


maybe i should rephrase my poem lol! if you are of the species you're just plain confusing!
robin

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8 posted 2001-05-26 12:34 PM


Not all guys don't ask for directions.  

Pretty good poem though. Thanks for the read.

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

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9 posted 2001-05-29 12:37 PM


ha not all guys whatever! all guys!
robin

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10 posted 2001-05-29 01:06 PM


due to some of your recent work, it seems that guys are not your favorite things recently, and i can respect that.  that's why all my friends are female    anyway, cute piece, keep posting

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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11 posted 2001-05-29 11:06 PM


Ok well, you say "be men" but in the poem you talk about how men are not quite what they should be.  Was this intentional?  
I didn't enjoy the poem much as a poem itself, but I expect that what you were communicating was intended to be the main focus of the poem.
Therefore I'm irrelevant, I'm not the target audience.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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