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Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-05-24 07:38 PM

Dancing inward, blades flashing,
Ducking downward, blades evading,
Spinning forward, blades clashing,
Leaping skyward, shadows fading,

Blazing dragons in the sky,
A battle unknown to men,
Dragons fighting til they die,
The battle begins again.

Darting inward, fires starting,
Dodging downward, fires burning,
Running forward, fires parting,
Flying skyward, liars learning,

Blazing dragons in the sky,
Fighting for their den,
Dragons fighting til they die,
The battle begins again.

Plunging inward, talons screaming,
Falling downward, talons crying,
Striking forward, talons gleaming,
Bursting skyward, dragons dying.

"No one holds command over me.
No man.
No god.
No prince."

© Copyright 2001 Adam Kamerer - All Rights Reserved

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-24 07:43 PM

very interetsing adam...i liked the different sytle of poetry...thanks for sharing and hope to see more...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-05-24 10:03 PM

wow..this was great!!...i love the flow and format to it...really welll thought over!!!....great job on this one..hope to read more from you soon!!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

3 posted 2001-05-24 10:22 PM

I really like your rhythm.

And, being a dragon fan, I'm adding this to my library! I finally figured out what it was...

"If I find in myself desires which nothing in this world can satisfy, the only logical explanation is that i was made for another world."
-C.S.Lewis

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-25 03:54 AM

This was good. I thought you did exceptionally well on this one.
Hope to see more!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

zarina
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since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

5 posted 2001-05-25 06:22 AM

Actually Im no fan of dragon poems, but I liked this one..

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