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HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

0 posted 2001-05-24 01:26 AM

I reach out for you,
To find that your not there.
Are you feeding lies to me?
when I cry do you even care?

Does it even bother you,
That I'm in so much pain?
From this situation,
I have nothing t gain.

But I can't turn my feelings off,
Unlike you I care so much
I wish I could be with you
I am longing for your touch.

Im so unsure of things right now,
And I'm sure that you are too.
But I hope that in the future,
I can be with you.

When I kiss you it hurts,
Because I know that your not mine.
But when you ask me what is wrong,
I lie and say I'm fine.

I'm sick of chasing you around,
Forever I will not wait.
I don't want to stay around,
To hear my awful fate.

So whenver you are ready,
You can come and find me.
You dont want a girlfriend,
So I will have to let you be.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-24 02:42 AM

Ashley...this was a heartfelt poem...great job on writing this...i really liked it...hope everythings alright tho...as this was a sad situation...but thanks for sharing and hope to see more...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-24 03:54 AM

Unrequited love is the worst feeling....but you will find a man who will love you back sometime soon.
Good luck....and this poem was pretty good.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-05-24 07:54 AM

This was extremely heartfelt and you all your hurt was seeped into the poem. Excellent job and I hope things get better

::Hugs::

zarina
Member

since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

4 posted 2001-05-24 11:10 AM

what can I say? wonderful poem.. You're not the only one feeling this way.. I hope things works out for you

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

5 posted 2001-05-24 11:14 AM

wow i know the feeling too much...you put everything that needed to be said in this pome, great job

*KiMMiE*

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