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knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-05-23 11:56 PM

you hurt me with your words
not meaning to really
you did nothing
nothing

maybe thats why
why im dying inside
the nothing you did
cut me to the bone

these wounds wont heal
they hurt to deep
you did nothing
and hurt me more then anyone

this pain wont stop
it never goes away
the nothing you did
makes me go numb

dont say anything
dont do anything
just do nothing
like you always did

leave me alone
youve done enough already
with the nothing you did
'now my walls are closing in'

im sorry

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

Just leave me alone and give me some space.

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-23-2001).]

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-24 01:09 AM

heavy poem...i enjoyed this poem...and i like the fact that u post...not so serious then sometimes in between serious poems... very...enjoying...thats why i can see different angels of your poetry...and i like that...thanks for the read...and keep writing tiff

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2001-05-24 01:24 AM

goodness tiff! strong poem! i'm here if ya need me buddy!
robin

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-24 04:04 AM

Not your best, but very emotional and I liked it for that.
I did like the poem and I do hope to read more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-05-24 07:50 AM

Its so hard when you find that the one person that you always expect to be there for you, missing. I can imagine that this person hurt you a great deal and im very sorry that they werent there for u. Maybe you should show this to them to show them how you truely feel by the actions. Great poem hun..keep em comin

zarina
Member

since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

5 posted 2001-05-24 11:08 AM

This was very nice! I loved it..

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