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fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15
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Lessburg Virginia

0 posted 2001-05-22 11:30 PM


Meditations

Whisp'ring my name
Like breath
Like dream
nuzzled in darkness
your Face, hidden by shadows
a soul reveals your presence
Warm glow Blue light dancing
Sleep ponders beyond
What I will call
Perfection

Washing of past
I rock my head
This song to meditation
Repetion for forever
      Sweet
         To steal the honey
         To cry in my arms
         And stick forever

Weeping is soon
No tears come
I slow
So we can breath together
Fall into your rhythm (meditation)
As you fall into mine
Heart (MeditAtion)


"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
Robert Fr

© Copyright 2001 Sean Michael DeFlora - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-05-23 01:19 AM


This was highly interesting. I really liked the format and style you wrote this in. A true treat for me! I liked this a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
2 posted 2001-05-23 02:23 AM


wow...you're really great at capturing the sereaness (sp?) that comes from meditation..i love this piece...i found my mind 'easing' as it were when i read it..great job!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 294
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3 posted 2001-05-23 09:19 PM


This was really different.  It kind of has a whispered quality to it, and i like that aspect a lot.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05
Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)
4 posted 2001-05-23 09:44 PM


im with OOC i think the italics made it seem like a whisper..good job!
        *KiMMiE*

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