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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-05-22 08:45 PM


I am frustrated.
frustrated with life.
frustrated with dialysis.
i want it to go away!
i am frustrated!

day by day i pray.
but it does not go away.
the illness i have it's stuck,
stuck in my head.
stuck in my body.

please make it go away!
this poem is about my kidney failure and how frustating it is.
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

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1 posted 2001-05-22 08:50 PM


My Aunt had to do that too.....I only know it's very hard to go through....I'm sorry you are having to do this....you wrote of the fustration well    SEA
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2 posted 2001-05-22 11:21 PM


I'm sorry that this is going on with you.
I hope things get better.
Good vent..it's always good to get it out.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-05-23 01:34 AM


your not alone...i loved this poem also cuz i written the same topic...i myself is gonig thru very frustrating sitaution...its exactly how i feel!...thanks for sharing it and i hope you are strong enough to overcome it as i am....keep writing... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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4 posted 2001-05-25 01:36 PM


tks all! it's so hard to times to face my problem but i have overcome from it!
robin

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5 posted 2001-06-16 02:23 PM


I'm sorry that you have to go through all this.  It can be very frustrating, but you have the strength to overcome it.  Good luck... the poem was well written, and the emotion is awesome.  Like I said, I'm sorry, just remember that we're all here for you.  Nice work.

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