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TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23
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Vereeniging, South-Africa

0 posted 2001-05-22 04:00 PM


A furious circle
with no end,
there's no time
for wounds to mend
cause there's no time
for them to care,
and good intentions
are very rare.

From that circle
I try to run,
I try to escape
bit it's never done.
I find the end
only to find a begin,
there's no way...
no one can win!

But I will not stop,
I won't give in,
even if it means
I'll never win,
to win you need
to run the pace
but I don't want
part of this race.

But I will not stop,
I believe I am strong,
this life we live
isn't really that long,
and when I die
I'll be able to say:
"I live my life,
and did it may way!"

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

© Copyright 2001 TearsOfPearls - All Rights Reserved
Dana Samples
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since 2001-04-07
Posts 68

1 posted 2001-05-22 04:05 PM


hey this was really great! i think everyone should do it their own way and not follow the "in" group. don't listen to other peoples rules or ways unless you know its right for you. i truely love it.

lots of love, dana

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2 posted 2001-05-22 08:46 PM


Very great poem, but the last line "my" is spelled wrong....
I really liked the poem. Great job on it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa
3 posted 2001-05-23 12:18 PM


oops...so it is...hehe...thanks,  

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

anonymous albert ?
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4 posted 2001-05-23 02:24 AM


really liked this poem and had a good message to it...thanks for sharing it...hope to see more... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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5 posted 2001-05-23 03:21 AM


you go girl! awesome pome! your way or the highway!
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

baby0508
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since 2001-05-16
Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut
6 posted 2001-05-23 11:46 AM


This is a really good poem. The words that you used were very strong.. good for you!!!!


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