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joycerogers
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since 2001-05-16
Posts 83
Texas

0 posted 2001-05-22 11:57 AM


Guys,I heard you were asking,
"How did he get such a pretty girl?"
He revealed the beauty of life
to me in my ole ugly world.

He revealed to me the
Power of simplicity,
The beauty of love,
Beyond eternity.

He taught me to look beyond
His face, that I might see,
His compassion for me.

He shared with me the
Power of living pure.
I've grown so many ways
Because he is so mature.

He treats me like a lady,
Which is more than I say for yall.
He isn't interested in running
A game or making a booty call.

You laugh out loud at him
Because he's still a virgin.
But I find this to be beautiful,
In fact it is encouraging.

It is a thing of rarity
To find a male of such dignity,
Only his future wife, will have
The priveilege of taking his virginity.

He got me because he is
Beautiful on the inside.
He got me because he is
A friend in which I confide.

Instead of being a part,
He stands apart.
That's why and how,
Guys...he won my heart.


Observe the animals and they shall teach you the nature of life in man. Observe the earth and it shall reveal the nature of life in God.

- Joyce

[This message has been edited by joycerogers (edited 05-22-2001).]

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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
1 posted 2001-05-22 12:39 PM


this was awesome.... powerful feelings...  this guy sounds like he is something rare...(sighs)

regina
awesome work!!!1

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27
Posts 946
viginia
2 posted 2001-05-22 05:57 PM


he sounds like a really great guy, and this is a sweet poem about him, i hope you give hima copy.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2001-05-22 10:14 PM


Well done here. I enjoyed this and the guy sounds like a good one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?
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Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-05-23 02:01 AM


yea...sounds like a nice guy...and i liked it a lot...awesome job...and hope to see more... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

anonymous albert ?
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5 posted 2001-05-23 02:04 AM


i read it again and i still like it...hehe ...keep writing tho... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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