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Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-05-22 08:28 AM

This year has been a hard one,
I've lost a couple friends,
And while it's hard to say goodbye,
I know it's not the end.

Some people have turned out to be,
what I thought they were not,
and I've showed some people,
that friendship cannot be bought.

I lost one friend to death,
and now she's watching over us,
she's one of heaven's angels,
someone for us to trust.

I lost one friend for a reason,
that's still unknown to me,
but if she;s gonna be like that,
I guess I'll let her be.

But I've got some of Heaven's Angels,
guiding me through all that,
I've got some of Heaven's Angels,
and you are one of them.

This is sort of a toned down rant.
And expression.

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2001-05-22 08:35 AM

Great poem Allysa, well done

Zu

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

2 posted 2001-05-22 09:54 AM

This was sad, but sweet. I liked it alot. Hope things turn out good for you.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2001-05-22 12:44 PM

Allysa, this was a very powerful piece of writing. Ive lost friends this year..llots of them..... your right.... in everything you said.

regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-05-22 12:56 PM

Allysa, you've expressed so much emotions lately. Hope you really are doing fine

keep writing and sharing
it helps
~*hugs*~

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-05-22 06:02 PM

glad to see you post something again, i hadn't heard form you in a while

you did a beautiful job on this, i know she is watching over you in everything you do. i hope things are getting better, keep sharing with us.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-05-22 09:16 PM

Well done on this one. I liked it a lot and yes your friend is watching over you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

7 posted 2001-05-22 09:27 PM

touching

Meggie1986
Junior Member

since 2001-05-22

Posts 41
California

8 posted 2001-05-22 10:36 PM

Wow, really striking. You're writing is beautiful, and I only hope that if I lose a friend, that I will be able to feel her watching down on me as well. That was wonderful.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

9 posted 2001-05-23 12:36 PM

great poem...i liked it a lot...u expressed your emotions well...very good job...hope to see more...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

10 posted 2001-05-23 04:11 PM

HEY! you used my name!! lol j/k
I know how you feel i have lost one cousin, one grandmother, and 2 friends on me this year but they guide me through each and everday and so does your friend

keep smiling

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

11 posted 2001-05-23 04:12 PM

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

12 posted 2001-05-24 02:44 PM

Im sorry that you went through all this during this year...hopefully things will get better

I guess nothing is at appears to be and nothings as it seems...

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

13 posted 2001-05-25 03:38 PM

Thanks ya all!

And, I'm sorry for all of you who had to go through the pain of losing someone.

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

14 posted 2001-05-25 07:00 PM

Hope you're better

~*hugs*~

Love and hugs

Acire

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

15 posted 2001-05-25 07:32 PM

Wow, i liked this. good job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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