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DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

0 posted 2001-05-21 10:35 PM

Do you ever miss me
and I mean truly miss me
What about my smile
or the way I cared
Do you ever think about me
and the way i put up with you
What about the way
I always made you laugh
Do you ever realize
what you walked away from
I'm not like the rest
and one day you'll see that
You won't be able
to go an hour without
remembering my smile
             my laugh
              my kiss
               my tears
And I hope you'll never forget
the way I gave you everything I had

-=-=I just found this cleaning out my locker today..not my best but its something new, because I haven't been able to write for awhile..

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2001-05-22 12:58 PM

DQ~
Damn girl..I like this one alot!! It is really great. You expressed yourself amazingly. Dont feel bad about posting an old poem, go look and see the last time I posted one. I cant write for anything right now. Keep it up girl!

"If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend."

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2001-05-22 08:14 AM

Good stuff DQ, I really liked it.

Zu

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2001-05-22 08:27 AM

Very good...oh boy can I relate!!!
Keep em coming, I miss seeing your work!!

Jenn

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

4 posted 2001-05-22 04:18 PM

thank you

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-05-22 05:37 PM

beautiful emotions, i love this poem. you did a really wonderful job on this, i like it a lot

keep sharing your work

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-05-22 06:43 PM

~*hugs sweets*~
I'll always be here to talk to
hope you get to writing again

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-05-22 10:36 PM

This is kinda sad.....Hope things get better for you, but I felt this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

8 posted 2001-05-23 01:03 AM

  How is going girl?I read your poems now and understand them a lot more then before.But this poem is sad but also a great piece so keep up the great work and i'll talk to you soon.
  Love,
    Lauren

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

9 posted 2001-05-23 01:16 AM

i liked the way u wrote your emotions in this one...graet job and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

10 posted 2001-05-23 09:07 PM

dang... wow... good... LOL that's all i can say. would you mind if i gave this to my ex? well... i'm not gonna give it to him, more like, um how shall we say, putting it somewhere where he'll see it. like on his dashboard. hahaha jk

this was WONDERFUL!!!!! i love the last 2 lines... that was an awesome clincher. great job.

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

11 posted 2001-05-23 11:11 PM

thanks again guys

and no i dont mind if u give it to him

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

12 posted 2001-05-24 08:07 AM

Awww hun this was so sad!! We need to talk hun

I hope your doing better ::hugs::

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

13 posted 2001-05-24 12:19 PM

i hope this reply finds you in a better frame of mind....

hugs

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

14 posted 2001-05-24 05:15 PM

very nice
it's going in my library

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