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Terryloveiris_85
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 61
The middle of nowhere

0 posted 2001-05-21 08:06 PM

It comes so naturally,
loving you.

I can't help it,
what I feel.

I can't make you,
love me.

But, oh, how I wish,
we could be together.

What about now?
couldn't we be together?

Couldn't we at least try?
What about now?.......

i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack

goodness is found in the heart, not the money.

obscurity of cloud
Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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1 posted 2001-05-21 08:09 PM

This has a really sweet meaning and the couplets add a nice touch.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-21 09:41 PM

sad...but written good on that subject...hope thing turn out the ebst for u...keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-05-21 10:23 PM

*sighs* Oh, how I can relate... well done

,
Suga

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

4 posted 2001-05-21 10:37 PM

i was told by someone today that he doesn't want to date anymore because hes afraid we're getting to close to fast and he doesnt want to get hurt or hurt me~ PISSES ME OFF! How can you just do that?? UGGH! but this poem hit the spot..awesome, keep posting!

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-05-22 01:10 PM

"what about now, how 'bout tonight, baby for once lets don't think twice..." great country song, now it's stuck in my head

i like this, very sweet. keep posting

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-05-22 08:03 PM

Nicely done.....I liked this one and wish you luck.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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