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CwboyAtHeart
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0 posted 2001-05-21 01:02 AM


Howdy!  This is another poem I just got done writing.  It's the first poem I have ever written that doesn' rhyme, so let me know what you think.  I have no idea where the idea came from...  But it's the truth.  There are many roads to take in life, and many may lead to anywhere...  I have no idea where I belong in life, but I guess I'm in for the ride.  The ride of my life...  


WHERE I BELONG

Walking my way
Through this world
Trying to find out
Where I belong

I stop sometimes
And take a look
Maybe today
Will be the day

One of these days
I'll find my way'
I will finally
Find the right road

I turn to my right;
There's many turns
I turn to the left;
I can't see where it ends

I'll have to pick one
And take a chance
My walk will slow
Or it will turn to a run

I have faith
That I will discover
Just who I am
And where I belong

      - Cody -

Living From Memories
Living From Thoughts
There Are Some Things In Live
That Cannot Be Taught

© Copyright 2001 C.K.N. - All Rights Reserved
MindlessPoet
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since 2001-04-20
Posts 106
Texas
1 posted 2001-05-21 01:05 AM


not bad, not bad at all    Keep on writin' cowboy.

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me.  The Weird One.

anonymous albert ?
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2 posted 2001-05-21 01:07 AM


great job...i really liked what u were saying in this...thanks for the read... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Xeonox
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3 posted 2001-05-21 02:19 AM


Nice poem. Simply put.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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4 posted 2001-05-21 11:12 AM


Well done COdy....soon enough you'll find it all out....but not too soon!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Low Man's Lyric
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since 2001-04-03
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In a dream
5 posted 2001-05-21 11:52 AM


I ask myself the same question, I really like this poem from you and it is great without any rhyming.

Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."  
~Anonymous

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6 posted 2001-06-10 07:43 PM


Just be patient cause the day will surely come  

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

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