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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-05-21 12:24 PM


Dating a guy is like riding a horse.
You fall off,you get back on.
you get dumped,you find a new guy.

guys can be very stubborn,
so you teach to listen.
with horses you saddle them up and make them listen.

guys like to rush into things a lot of the time.
but then also there are some who like to go slow.
with horses you can pick what ever pace you wanna go,
you are in control.
most guys won't let you control anything.

Robin  

ok if this offends any guy that reads this i'm sorry. it's just my opinion. please don't take me seriously.

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

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1 posted 2001-05-21 12:28 PM


guys=horses ...hehe...hey im not offened ...just kiddin...but i thought u did quite well on writing this...hope to see more...

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"



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2 posted 2001-05-21 12:38 PM


i liked the format this poem followed very clever    btw robin i think you and me need to have a serious talk hun heh  very soon if ya know wut i mean

ben redshaw the not so happy and not so horsish

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CwboyAtHeart
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3 posted 2001-05-21 12:44 PM


One word for you.  Neigh.  

Just teasin, the poem was good, I enjoyed it.  Very interesting comparison(sp?).  I agree, some guys can be 'horses.'  Not offended at all.  Another good poem of yours, keep it up!  

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4 posted 2001-05-21 11:10 AM


I thought we were dogs or pigs....now horses? Hmmmm might as well own a farm eh?!
Nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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5 posted 2001-05-21 11:51 AM


I prefer to think of guys as hand bags. They look great with an outfit but once that style is out of fashion you get rid of them. It's a good system. This way you are ALWAYS in fashion and don't have to have unwanted junk lying around.

Anyway, enough of my opinion on boyfriends. Your piece was good. If an animal had to be chosen, a horse is appropriate.

Great job.  

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
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6 posted 2001-05-21 01:36 PM


hee hee, i think i'll be staying away from AF    i thought this was a cute analogy, it worked rather well unfortunately.  keep sharing your work with us

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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7 posted 2001-05-21 04:41 PM


Hehe this was a great comparison!!!  Cute.  

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8 posted 2001-05-23 12:14 PM


goodnes af you're harsh! lol! well anyways glad yall liked it!
robin

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9 posted 2001-06-09 07:24 AM


ok yall how many of ya can relate to this? i know i can!
robin

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10 posted 2001-06-10 07:41 PM


I do believe that us guys are like balloons.  The only time girls actually look up to us is when we are full of hot air  

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11 posted 2001-06-11 02:08 AM


hi, i am a guy but i am not offended but you made a descent and valid point about guys but what most females dont realize that females are the same way. so please read my next poem called "Females". and please get back to me promptly so we can have a discussion on what we think ok. thanx peace.
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12 posted 2001-06-11 07:48 AM


Hey I resemble that remark thank you I mean resent it no jk um, so what your saying robin is That i'm like Mr. Ed right when I speak the words don't follow the movement of my lips? lol talk to you later.

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13 posted 2001-06-11 09:50 AM


This was good. lol.  I do the horsebackiriding, and i really can agree about guys being horses. but you always get some what attached (sigh) ok ill stop daydreaming now  
good poem robin


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