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punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2001-05-20 04:59 AM

I wait for you.
you do not show.
i hope you have not forgotten me.
i am waiting.

i see people pass by hoping it's you.
i wave.
i feel like an idiot.
it's not you.
i am waiting for you.

i wait for you hoping you will come.
i wait for you cus i love you.
please come i am waiting.

Robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

zarina
Member

since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

1 posted 2001-05-20 05:17 AM

good poem. A guy for you will show up someday, but.. as you say, waiting is hard. keep on writing

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-20 01:07 PM

I found this to be sad....I hope the guy comes eventually. Well done though.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

3 posted 2001-05-20 03:40 PM

the waiting is the hardest part, especially when ther is the feeling that what you are waiting for may not come. you did wonderful job expessing that here, great job

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

4 posted 2001-05-20 07:09 PM

very cool poem robin i know the feeling not in the same context you used it but the same type of feeling awesome hun keep it up i love you

ben

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

5 posted 2001-05-20 08:13 PM

trust me all the waiting is worth it in the end

*KiMMiE*

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-20 10:26 PM

sad but u wrote it so well...i liked it(the poem) but yea...i hope things turns out best for u...great job on the poem...

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

7 posted 2001-05-20 11:57 PM

tks all! i just wish the waiting didn't take so long.

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

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