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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i lost my way and i hurt myself i needed you in my life and didnt even know it i ran from you thinking i was right 'but even if i run a thousand miles away from you, i know that your always just one step away' when i needed you in my life you were always there waiting for me to come back to stand by you and love you like you love me that quote is from "As I Lift My Hands" by Philmore. its a christian band...and they summarized that from Psalm 139:7-10. “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me I want to hear you say "Well done" [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-20-2001).] |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
tiff philmore is so awesome i saw them friday night. there drummer was hitting on me! hes so hot! anyways......great poem! robin   hahahahaha I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! [This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (edited 05-20-2001).] |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hey tiff i forgot to add you to my list on yahoo so like i think you have me on yours so try and find me k. robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
That was a great poem. And Philmore is awesome! hehe Keep writing and posting, I love to read your stuff. - Cody - |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Philmore rocks! Ok , i've never heard of them. I just wanted to be a part of the group...  is that a crime?!?!Anyway, well done on the poem. I thought you did quite well on it...  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This piece is beautifully done... and so true! Wonderful description of the Lords' endless love. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i liked the quote in the middle of the other two stanzas, very cool. you did an excellent job on this, i like it a whole lot. keep writing. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful job...i liekd it...thanks for the read...tiff... ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was beautiful...your very lucky to have such a wonderful and caring person in your life  |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I agree with Peter, I love how you surrounded the quote with your own poem. In a way it made it seem as though the poem revolved around the quote (which perhaps it did), but I didn't mind. I like what you've done here, Tiffer. I thought it was creative. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Ah Philmore they are alright lol...not my style though lol but I do like the words for that song |
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