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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2001-05-19 12:43 PM

Those harsh words,
Broke my heart in two.
Never again,
Will i fully be able to trust you.
Your swore was empty,
That you made to me.
Never to hurt me intentionally,
Now my eyes are swollen and red,
Cant u see?
You cut my breath short,
Wasnt able to breathe.
Tears rolled down my face,
You killed me.
Now you want me to love you,
With all i have to give.
But how could i do that?
When you took away my love for you within...
I trusted you not to hurt me,
You swore on me that day.
Now empty and hallow,
My happiness is fading away.
I dont feel whole n e more,
I barely feel alive.
All because of what you said to me,
My heart has died.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-19 12:59 PM

this is so sad....trust is very fragile.....

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-19 05:00 PM

Indeed it is.......well done and I hope all is mended soon.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-20 04:01 AM

sad...but you put your emotions well thru this poem...i enjoyed the read...but hope everything turns out the best for u...

.../

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

zarina
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since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

4 posted 2001-05-20 05:10 AM

I know how you feel.. I've been there too. It's really sad, but you'll get over it..
nice poem

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-05-20 03:36 PM

you did a beautiful job expressing yourself, the emotion in this is truly beautiful. great job on this, keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

6 posted 2001-05-20 07:14 PM

Sad. Hope you'll feel better soon.*hugs*

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

7 posted 2001-05-20 08:07 PM

this is a great poem i hope ya feel better

*KiMMiE*

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-06-02 05:11 PM

Sad poem ShugarShelly. Beautifully written emotions though. Hope things get better for ya ~*hugs*~

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

9 posted 2001-06-02 05:20 PM

Your poem is so sad but I'm sure a lot of people have been through that situation and I know you can get though it.Keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

10 posted 2001-06-07 01:41 PM

hey sad poem and very powerful i think it was great good job!

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

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